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Post by Lobstrosity on Dec 23, 2005 2:04:03 GMT -5
I'm not, I mean. . . maybe it's kinda good, but. . .
It's not good enough
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Post by Decieved by the Truth on Jan 1, 2006 10:55:29 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]hmm...it looks like theres a lot happening that I dont know about...i would definetly say your poem is good Lobstrosity , maybe not the best poem that I have ever read, but WAY better than mine. I mean, come on, you have to give yourself some credit, there are like 3 people that say it is good, and thats gotta say something about it. if you keep denying it then that will just say you are craving compliments. say thank you, and go try to improve on it if you dont think it is good enough. I mean, even ebautafish likes it!  [/glow]
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Post by Lobstrosity on Jan 1, 2006 12:24:07 GMT -5
Sorry, thanks everyone who said my poem was good. I really appreciate it and I'm not just trying to get attention by saying it wasn't. I thought it was pretty good too, but not spectacular.
The only reason I didn't want people to say it was good is that the only person who's opinion really matters probably doesn't care.
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Post by Lobstrosity on Jan 21, 2006 2:14:46 GMT -5
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~ -squiggly line thing- Andrew or Lobstrosity or whichever
Deleted this thing I wrote because of all the things I wish I never wrote this is the thing I wish I never wrote the most.
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Post by Azan on Jan 21, 2006 14:31:31 GMT -5
Hey man don't be so hard on yourself  . Dont let life get you down, don't worry you wont feel like this forever. Try not to think about it too much or it will consume you, when you feel really down focus on some activity (such as video games or in my case programming). I wish the best of luck to you. |
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Post by Lobstrosity on Jan 21, 2006 21:00:26 GMT -5
*snap*
Wow, crazy. ;D
I'm like, me again or something.
Uh, yeah. . .
me.
I'm gonna resolve not to use the . . . punctuation too much anymore.
This is weird.
Well there's not much I can do, but as long as I stay me I think it won't get any worse. I don't know how long I'll be me though.
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Post by Lobstrosity on Jan 22, 2006 20:18:49 GMT -5
Well there's this one girl at my school who I like, but I guess I'm too nervous to talk to her. I suppose I could try to email her or something.
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Post by Decieved by the Truth on Jan 23, 2006 7:24:05 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]danielle? the same one I know?[/glow]
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Post by Lobstrosity on Jan 23, 2006 15:45:56 GMT -5
yeah
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Post by xXMidori-ToraXx on Jan 23, 2006 23:05:19 GMT -5
mind if I add something? cool.
Today feels better The big picture in bite-size pieces... that fit perfectly into my palm... perfectly digestable, understandable, absorbed... The only time I unwind let it all loose... like a shaken soda pop I fizz all over and can't help but smile when I see you laugh I'll try to savor this bite size moment... always knowing I'll want more
I call it Soda Pop and Simple Smiles, I like the way that sounds. Its not sposed to be for anyone, thats not how I roll.
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Post by Decieved by the Truth on Jan 24, 2006 7:37:07 GMT -5
nice
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Post by Lobstrosity on Jan 27, 2006 1:12:57 GMT -5
hmm. . .
Depression occurs when motivation and desire exceed ability.
That's my random observation for today.
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Post by xXMidori-ToraXx on Jan 29, 2006 20:50:51 GMT -5
Try on a smile to bring out the glow in your eyes It always brings me down to size... natural and true I could never stand to lie to you I'll leave my memories open if you promise to fill them with all that you think... Better than ink We always seem to drop it letting it fall... and spread across the soft wooden floor It is still greater than anything in the world and more And what you think... what we write and how we get it said The words drop like lead They leave you broken in a world that always looked so whole Contantly changing its original shade... making you colorblind and robbed of your sences... mixing your tences...
.... breaking...
The levels set to extreme Maybe its all just a dream But your voice is echoing in the darkness... and its the most beautiful sound, no less
Yea, I guess I just the feeling the words make when they're together, so you'll have to excuse me if it doesn't make sence. I don't have a title for that one, and I think they look alot better handwritten and unseen so whatever.
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Post by Lobstrosity on Jan 29, 2006 21:57:12 GMT -5
It's good; better than mine, but I don't know what it means. Maybe I should read it more carefully when I have the time.
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Post by xXMidori-ToraXx on Feb 1, 2006 20:33:18 GMT -5
Thanks, but I don't really think of mine as anything, they're just my head. I'm not sure what it means either. I think I wrote it when I was feeling sort of alone or missing someone or something. Its just yea.
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. Dont let life get you down, don't worry you wont feel like this forever. Try not to think about it too much or it will consume you, when you feel really down focus on some activity (such as video games or in my case programming).